PHOTOSHOOT #5!

ONE CALLOUT FOR SIMPLE, ONE FOR DRAMATIC!

CHANTAL:
Simple:

Dramatic:


KILLIAN:
Simple:

Dramatic:



JONNY:
Simple:

Dramatic:



AMARANTH:
Simple:

Dramatic:


LAUREN:
Simple:

Dramatic:


KARASU:
Simple:

Dramatic:

SIMPLE

Amaranth

I agree with Bree. If you would have looked at the camera, it would have made a good picture so much better. Instead it just looks like you're just laying there and someone took the picture. It is a pretty picture, but it's a bit boring.

Lauren

I like it. The pose works, the outfit, everything. It's soft, but not so soft that it makes it boring. And yeah, I agree about the pouting thing. Try to take it down a notch.

Karasu

You know, people have said that you look like Hal Sparks, and I never saw it. Now I do. Anyway, this picture is awesome. It looks so effortless. You look tired, but it somehow works. My only problem is the hands, or well, the fingers. I don't know why exactly. Maybe if you were just sticking your thumbs in the pockets?

Chantal

You look so different in this picture. Your eyes look so intense in this picture. I like it. I do have a problem with your arm. It looks a bit weird. Oh and you lost your neck. Those are my only negatives comments.

Killian

Were you trying to do Mckey's signature pose? Your eyes, man. They're almost closed and that really brings down the picture. It would have been better if you were just standing face on and slightly squint the eyes. I've just noticed, you look like Haley Joel Osment.

Jonny
This is reminiscent to your framed picture, and that picture was great. This one's great too! It's simple, but there's something in there. Great job!

DRAMATIC~

Chantal

This. picture. is. amazing! You look pissed off, you're being arrogant, you're showing off your dress, everything's awesome. I don't have any negative comments.

Killian

This is your best picture to date! You're facial expression is really great. You too did a comeback from the simple picture. The only problem is that your hands are lost. It's not that much of a problem, but maybe you could have created a more dynamic pose.

Jonny

It's a good picture, but there's nothing outstanding about it. The face is good, but I don't really see anything "dramatic" about it. It is a bit dull.

Amaranth

Awesome comeback from the simple picture. The pose is great, the outfit is made of win, your hair and makeup are awesome, the background is art. I don't have a problem with the coat hiding your arm (it's not really your fault), but I do with the tension around your mouth. It makes it look like you have worry lines and makes you look a bit older. That's the only negative thing. Great job.

Lauren

Now, I much prefer your simple picture. It's the same facial expression as your simple picture, but it doesn't work here. We wanted something weird and dramatic and lots of makeup and wild hair. You didn't really give us that. The outfit could have been cool, but we can't really see it.

Karasu
AWESOME JOB! The clothes are great, the makeup's there, but it's subtle. Your expression is great, and ..are you jumping? If you are, then it's even better because it doesn't show in your face. If you aren't, it's still a great pic. The only problem is you lost your neck too.



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simple

karasu
lauren
jonny
chantal
amaranth
killian


dramatic
chantal
karasu
amaranth
killian
lauren
jonny

CHANTAL (SIMPLE): I love the emotion in your expression, but i'm not in love with the pose. Your arms are too restricted and hidden. Also, with this wonderful over-the-shoulder look we have lost your neck completely.
CHANTAL (DRAMATIC): Very ANTM, very couture! I love the outfit, the makeup, everything. There is so much to look at here, which is great. The pose shows off your clothing very well.
KILLIAN (SIMPLE): Though I commend you for sticking to the brief this time, your eyes are almost completely lost, and again, it's too much of your upper body. This pose would be fantastic if we could see your legs. I have to ask, how many shots do you usually take? You should have enough shots so that you can turn in something with open eyes.
KILLIAN (DRAMATIC): I had to stare at this shot for a while to figure out where the ground was, and to be honest i'm STILL not sure. lol. This is a very dynamic, extreme shot, and I'm pleased you took risks. Your face looks great, Natasha! I wish you would have done something with your arms, you look like you're in a straightjacket. Easily your best shot to date, though.
JONNY (SIMPLE): Nice, very professional and simple. You are in a very comfortable pose that makes your body, and the clothes, look great. Very marketable, with a strong face.
JONNY (DRAMATIC): I'm not quite sure this is couture. It's more Broadway-ruffian to me. The pose and setting are great, but i wish you were wearing darker colors and pants that weren't blue jeans. Strong face and eyes, an upturned angle of the head would have made this more dynamic and brought your neck out from behind that collar.
AMARANTH (SIMPLE): Unique choice to lay on the floor! This is so quiet, relaxed, and pretty; I love the intensity behind your eyes, it looks like you're listening to someone off camera as they tell a story. I like that there's a slight tweak of tension in your mouth.
AMARANTH (DRAMATIC): Wow! The frozen tundra of Wisconsin is really workin' it here, and so are you! Now that's a couture outfit. So many different patterns make this a dynamic shot, and your broken-down-doll pose makes this very editorial. Your makeup is very intense too, I love the pale lip.
LAUREN (SIMPLE): Good shot. I like the pose very much, it shows off your super-slim body. This looks like a fade-out shot post makeover for the real ANTM! You followed the brief to a T with your outfit, face, and background, it all looks very young and fresh.
LAUREN (DRAMATIC): It's slightly more fashionable than a candid shot of someone falling down the stairs. Really I approve of everything YOU'RE doing in the shot, I just don't see anything bold and dramatic in your outfit, hair, or makeup. The boots are interesting, sure, but coupled with the completely normal outfit doesn't make this a couture shot. Excellent pose though.
KARASU (SIMPLE): The pose is very commercial, as is the expression. You look so cool! Everything is good about this, except for the eyes. You look drowsy, and that pulls your face down. Which is funny, because in your dramatic shoot I thought your eyes were too intense. Find a nice quiet medium.
KARASU (DRAMATIC): I love how it looks like you're floating off the ground. Like I said before, the face is a little too intense in this shot. I really like the different textures in your outfit. I almost wish the photographer had stepped back a little, it feels a little claustrophobic. Good angles, good look, all in all, well done.

CALLOUT ORDER (SIMPLE):

JONNY
LAUREN
KARASU
AMARANTH
CHANTAL
KILLIAN

CALLOUT ORDER (DRAMATIC):

CHANTAL
AMARANTH
KARASU
JONNY
KILLIAN
LAUREN

Chantal (Simple)
Because your picture last week had sunglasses on, this is the first picture where I have truly seen how beautiful your face really is. It's an absolutely gorgeous and perfect face. The problem is you look like you're in a straight jacket. The arm looks like it's got no bones, like in Harry Potter 2, and you're sticking out your butt a little. You also lost your neck once again. But for the face alone I love it.
Chantal (Dramatic)
This isn't just good for intm - this puts stuff on ANTM to SHAME! With the setting, the outfit, the pose, the face, it looks like a fashion story in Vogue. I think you were good at taking a quirky body pose and NOT overdoing it, wheras some people took the pigeon-toed or hand-on-hip thing too far and made it look just plain silly. I love this, you are truly a model!
Killian (Simple)
The tininess of this picture worries me. Feels a little reminiscent of Shaq. This is a VERY contrived pose which has caused you to lose your face completely. I agree with Cozy that it doesn't seem like you've taken a lot of shots, because if you had, and evaluated yourself, you would have seen that there's no life in your eyes.
Killian (Dramatic)
Wait, what angle did you take this picture at? It's a bit confusing, but I actually think the face here makes up for your last one. This is effort that's NOT spitting back in your face - it actually works here. Remember when I told you to trust in your natural beauty? You totally are, and it looks incredible. The body could use some work, but your face is absolutely GORGEOUS. You look twenty.
Jonny (Simple)
Soft-baby-soft! This is softer than my legs after their monthly shaving! You also get that you don't need to be doing a crazy stare in order to have life in your eyes. Bravo on wonderful eyes, youngen! Also, the body is great because it's simple but your arms prevent it from being boring. Hey, Lesus, I think he's figured out his arms!!
Jonny (Dramatic)
Okay... still soft... It's nice, but... you know Jonny, thinking back, pretty much all your pictures have been this soft, gentle face. You've not yet given us CRZYFRCE (that's crazy-fierce). This would have been the perfect time. You actually look borderline-worried here. And I think you could have tried harder with the outfit. This outfit would even work for the simple. The body's great though.
AMARANTH (simple)
Body = 10. Face = 6? I actually disagree with Cozy, I think there's zero intensity in the eyes, and I know you can give intensity. I think maybe you were looking for "soft" but got vacant. Not every "intense" eye has to be a crazy stare. If it had focused on the camera, it could have been magical because this is a great, unique body, a clean setting... it's just not special.
AMARANTH (dramatic)
I LOVE this costume, Amaranth, and I wanna buy it! You're doing a very quirky body pose, which is good, but I think it got a bit sloppy. The pigeon-toed thing or the cocked-hip would have worked if you only did one of them. However, I'm just picking on a few little things to help make you better. As for your face, you look tense around your mouth like you're holding your breath, and your eyes aren't focused on ANYTHING. Normally your face is your strength.
LAUREN (simple)
I love-love-love this picture. I think you're really selling it with the body, and the angle is great for your face. You really made the clothes look great, and again something that happened in Week 1: your hair looks really cool. My one worry is that you tried to go for "simple" with the eyes but instead you look like you're about to cry. Just because you're not doing an "intense" eye doesn't mean you don't have to smile with 'em!
LAUREN (dramatic)
The body pose could have been VERY cool, but I think too much is going on at once. The face is also disappointing because it's the same as last one. Dramatic could have been CRAZY-cool. This is your weakest shot to date. Hopefully the simple shot is enough to make up for it.
KARASU (simple)
LOOK AT THE MODEL! HE'S RIGHT THERE! Karasu, you're one of the only ones left who should be stomping into an agency RIGHT NOW. Your eyes are a good example of smiling and connecting with your eyes even if they're not scary/intense. Best eyes in the whole bunch so far. And I looove the effortless body language.
KARASU (dramatic)
Woahhh! You look ka-ray-zay! I really like that, again, you took a quirky body pose but made it just extreme enough that you didn't look ridiculous. I also adore your face... are you wearing eyeliner? You're one of the few whom BOTH pictures have been great for!

SIMPLE
Karasu
Jonny
Lauren
Chantal
Amaranth
Killian

DRAMATIC
Chantal
Karasu
Killian
Amaranth
Jonny
Lauren

I like a lot of these, I think there is so much potential this cycle!!!

Chantal (Simple)- Oh I am in love with this picture! Your eyes are exquisite you draw me in. I wish you showed a little more neck, but the pose is good.
Chantal (Dramatic)- You got the concept perfectly, I love what you did with the photo: from the pose all the way up to the face. This is very editorial in my opinion. You look great and I think you are someone that the other guys and girls in the house should be afraid of!
Killian (Simple)- Wake up! This is a photo shoot isn't it? Hmm I think you are Amaranth are a little sleepy today in your simple pictures.
Killian (Dramatic)- I love the angle at which this is taken. It creates almost a vortex effect and its very unique. In a way you resemble Robert Patterson in this picture, I think you did a good job!
Jonny (Simple)- You copied Samantha from ANTM Cycle 11! The pose is almost identical to hers. Its a decent shot, not one of my favorites, but it will do, your progressing from last weeks mess which is good! I think you could learn a thing or two from the other models.
Jonny (Dramatic)- It seems that you always give an "I'm pissed" face in every photo. Cheer up! I like this photo I do, I think you progressed this week which is always a good thing.
Amaranth (Simple)- It's so simple to the point where it gets boring. It honestly looks like your just watching Top Model on TV instead of trying to participate in a photoshoot. You took the simple concept to far in my opinion.
Amaranth (Dramatic)- After the YAWN!- fest that was your "Simple" photo I think this is leaps and bounds better than anything you have produced thus far. I love this shot. You look fantastic and I love this picture because you look like a completely different person. Very chameleon of you.
Lauren (Simple)- I love the way your body looks in the shot. But the face could use a little work. A little less pout of the lips would do you well, I can relate I do the same things in my pictures. It's a plain simple shot and I commend you for your efforts.
Lauren (Dramatic)- Did you fall down the steps or something? What's going on in this photo, I have no idea! Am I missing something? Where is the Lauren from last week? Can someone get her because this Lauren seems to have lost the model in her, I guess its from falling down this flight of steps.
Karasu (Simple)- I think that the judges and I all can agree that this shot is great! I think your taking the nose flair a little to far, bring it down a notch. But overall this shot takes the intended brief to the next level.The scarf takes a little bit of the intended simplicity away but once again you stayed on point, great job!
Karasu (Dramatic)- Fantastic! This so hits the nail on the head. I think some of the other models, cough... Jonny... cough, could learn a thing or two from you!

Simple
Karasu
Chantal
Lauren
Jonny
Killian
Amaranth

Dramatic
Karasu
Chantal
Amaranth
Jonny
Killian
Lauren

we're supposed to have two different call outs?

I think it'll work better this way.
Particularly because aside from Karasu, the others seemed to do well in one and not so well in the other. I think it's only fair.

last cycle we had to do just one :/
it wasn't that difficult, not really.

oops i think this is my fault
i just posted two because that's what we did for the Frame/Fiesta shoots.
Lesus what do we do?

Karasu's first dramatic pic TOTALLY reminds me of StevieMc's pic where hes coming through the window. Anyone else see it???

omg i totally see it now. lol.

Well Cozy I don't think it's a bad thing. I think we'll leave it at here for now until Lesus throws shit at us to make us change it.

where the hell is everybody? we only have three models pics so far that's pretty sad.
lol tomorrow we're gonna get like a flood of new pictures.

well they're due tomorrow. they still have a day :/

Let's lay off that slowpoke Lesus... he seems busy, and his normal day hours are different than our normal day hours. I know Jonny's handed his in and a few others said they handed theirs in, but Leigh just seems far too busy to log on.

ok yeah
i don't care at all if lesus doesn't turn stuff in
im more afraid of people getting apathetic and being like oh i don't feel like doing this anymore
but with this crowd i don't think that'll happen.

The only ones I can really see doing that are Lauren and possibly Sara.

i see chantal doing that.

Point: Nigel. I can see her doing that too, because she's been apprehensive about a lot of things. Like having her pictures online and stuff.

i don't think she'll do it, but if she does, i won't really be surprised

SORRY GUYS!!!!

ive been working like 7-10 hours a day every day this week and on top of that, our net has been slow coz dad downloaded skype for our german exchange student and ever since then, our net has been drooping out all the time

we are only waiting on mikiel and sara

AND YES TWO CALLOUTS PLEASE!!!!

CHANTAL SIMPLE: This is so gorgeous. Your connection with the camera is great and the control of the mouth aswell. I think it would have looked better with the hand on your hip, more like a model shot but I do kind of like the vulnerability the hidden hand brings, even though it kind of doesnt work for what we wanted.

CHANTAL DRAMATIC: YES YES YES I LOVE IT!!! This is so fashion. Quite probably one of my fave pics of the cycle so far. Everything about it is perfect. The setting, the outfit, the stance, the gaze. You are standing like a model and you look like you feel like the frickin coolest, hottest chick on the block in what your wearing. You sold this amazingly.

KILLIAN SIMPLE: I still dont think you are fully comfortable in your body or really understand what to do with it. The lean back doesnt quite work and not only are your eyes too squinty, but they arent focused on the camera. This was supposed to be natural and I think you tried too hard to do soemthing, where a simple head tilt may have worked better

KILLIAN DRAMATIC: Boy, your eyes are fierce here! And youve finally chosen a good outfit! The few things I dont like- You positioned the camera too high and cut your leg off. This happened in pretty much all your shots. We care more about your clothes than the background. Also, I dont know if you were holding onto soemthing, but you should have dropped one of your hands. Looking at it the wrong way, it kinda looks like you are taking a leak against the wall and leaning back to see whos interrupting. Love love the face though, and the hair!!

JONNY SIMPLE: FINALLY! I have been waiting for soemthing as natural as this from you. You arent trying too hard and youve let your arms do soemthing NATURAL rather than trying to MAKE them look natural but coming across forced.

JONNY DRAMATIC: YAY AGAIN! I really like it. Something about the composition is makiing me twitch though haha, I dunno, my instincts tell me it would have looked better if the pole wasnt in the miuddle of the frame, but rather, to the right a little more. The other thing I dont like is those damn jeans!!! Dotn wear them again unless the photoshoot is for the homeless!!! Lol. Take away the jeans and this would be great! Well...youd have to replace the jeans with more clothes of course haha!

AMARANTH SIMPLE: Hmm. Im bored by this photo. Theres really not much to it. Lying on the floor was an unusual choice and it didnt really look like a model shot, just a girl on the floor shot, coz thats basically all i feel from it, just a girl on the floor.

AMARANTH DRAMATIC: I LOVE everything except for the eyes. They arent present at all. I love the snowy trees in the background, they are so beautiful. Actually, I think im more intrigued by them than by you haha. I liked your pose, although you did pretty much the same pose in almost all of your frames. I wouldve loved to have seen you stand on that railing! That would have been interesting. Great outfit, I love it!!!!

LAUREN SIMPLE: What I love about you is that, we all know you are a shorty, but you always look SO tall! I like this. I dotnt hink theres anything POW about it, but its pretty and its nice and its simple, and thats what we wanted.

LAUREN DRAMATIC: Yeah, I was a bit disappointed that you left your hair and your face the same in both shots. You gave us some AMAZING shapes in your film, but your face fell flat, I think you were concentrating solely on the poses and not the expressions that went with them. We havnt really seen you be fierce yet, its either been goofy or smily. I wanna see some raw emotion from you, some pain! Like, even with this picture, it would have cool if youd even screamed a little, like youd just been pushed down the stairs or soemthing.

KARASU SIMPLE: LOVE IT! I dotn have anything bad to say about it, I think its really strong and sexy and comfortable. I thinbk its so much cooler when it looks like you arent trying that hard, that sort of aloofness that MrJanice spoke about in the first week with your fiesta shot. You have a natural ability to make your shots look....natural!

KARASU DRAMATIC: This was not my fave pic of you, I loved the one with the crazy eyes on the stairs. But, I lost again with the vote on that one haha. Again, this is effortless. I am a bit bummed we lost your other foot, though.

SIMPLE CALLOUT:
Karasu
Jonny
Chantal
Lauren
Amaranth
Killian

DRAMATIC CALLOUT:
Chantal
Karasu
Amaranth
Killian
Lauren
Jonny

THE DRAMATIC CALLOUT WAS HARD!!! SOME OF THEM WERE REAL CLOSE!

i read CRZYFIERCE as cozyfierce haha

Cozyfierce is redundant because Cozy = fierce.

Honestly though, I can't tear my eyes away from Chantal's photo. That chick is WORKING IT.