PHOTOSHOOT #1 AND #2

Hey judges, instead of individually sending out the photos this cycle, im gonna post them on here!

Make ONE post for your comments and come back to edit them as all the pics go up, just so everything is in one place. With soem of the shoots, youll notice that there are more than one frame. This means I couldnt decide which one to use and would like some input from you guys! So make sure you let me know which one you think is better. If there is more than one, dont comment on it just yet, until there is just one left. I will wait for two more judges inputs before I Make the decision. Also, some of the photos are so large they dont completely show on the post, so right click on them and select "Properties" to see the link to the photobucket.

Enjoy, these guys are proving to be really good, so think long and hard about your decisions!



PHOTOSHOOT #1: FRAMED

KENDRA:


CHANTAL-JADE:


LAUREN:


SHAQ:


CHLOE:


SARA:


AMARANTH:


MIKIEL:


ROBBIE:


JONNY:


KARASU:


KILLIAN:


PHOTOSHOOT #2- FORD FIESTA:


AMARANTH:


SARA:


SHAQ: This is the ONLY picture he sent me and I was tempted to not even post it-


CHLOE:


CHANTAL-JADE:


MIKIEL:


JONNY:


LAUREN:


ROBBIE:



KARASU:


KILLIAN:


more updated when i get them!

ok first.
i liked karasu's third fiesta the best.


now.
FRAMED

KENDRA
mmm i'm not a fan of this picture. you're not really doing anything. and it doesn't help that it looks like it was taken with a webcam. is it? it's not really a bad thing, but the quality of the picture doesn't look as great as the other ones.

CHANTAL
it would have been a great picture, but the angle kills it. i like your expression and your whole outfit, but i'm really not a fan of the angle. next time just try to do something simpler with the camera.

LAUREN.
it looks like, while you were waiting for your picture to get taken, the wind started blowing and moved your hair and made it crazy. i like it . it looks like a fun picture, and i think that that suits you.

SHAQ.
again, this looks like a webcam pic. the thing is, that if the quality was better, this would have been a nice picture. you're actually doing something. however, and i hate myself for quoting anyone from antm, this is modeling 101. try to do better next time.

CHLOE
love it! you look innocent and glamorous. it reminds me a lot of elyse's snake beauty shot. it's probably the surprise in your eyes. i like that you used a mirror. it's different and yet it follows the brief. great job.

SARA
i like it. at first it may seem as if you're just standing there but your facial expression is strong. you look mysterious and you're kinda smiling with your eyes. also, i like the contrast between your extremely colorful tye dye shirt, and the background. it makes you pop!.

AMARANTH
your eyes! one of the strongest expression in the bunch. you look evil which is awesome. i'm a fan of evilness. there's a subtle smile in your lips, which makes it even better. i think that if this were the killer shot, you would have nailed it haha.

MIKIEL
this picture's art. the way you used the frame, the lighting, your expression, everything about it screams art. the only negative thing is that i would have liked to see your eyes more. it would have kicked it up a notch. ugh i'm becoming emeril. anyway, awesome job!

ROBBIE
i like the effects, i like the facial expression, i like everything about this picture, except that it's a profile shot. it's good but i think it would have made much more of an impact if you were looking at the camera. that's the only negative thing i have to say

Jonny
this picture is absolutely fantastic. seriously. you look like a rockstar. i don't have anything negative to say about it. great job.

Karasu
now i get your effort, but i don't really think the makeup was necessary. it's not a bad picture, but not as good as the other ones. it's the first week, so it's understandable.

FIESTA!

KILLIAN
now i get what you were trying to do, but it just doesn't work. it just looks as if you were standing there and someone just took a picture. it would have been tons better if it was in a different angle. like, if the camera was in front of you, instead of being next to you.

CHANTAL
mmm i'm not a big fan of the pose haha. i think you were trying to turn this into the pin up girl shoot. i like the setting and your outfit, but the pose does not work here at all.

MIKIEL
i like it the pose works, the outfit works, the facial expression works. this is totally different from your framed picture. in that one, you were artistic, in this one, you're high fashion. great job.

JONNY
now i like your expression and the pose, but i'm not digging the outfit. the pants make you look shorter and i don't know about you guys, but i don't like it when i look short. so, top half: 10. bottom half:7.

LAUREN
this is a nice picture. so far, you're the only one who's done something different with the car other than just standing next to it, or leaning on it. i like you're expression. the purpose of the shoot was to look cool. i think you're bragging about the fact that you are cool in that picture.

ROBBIE
it looks like you're just standing there waiting for the picture to get taken, but it somehow works. i also like the fact that the outfit looks like something you actually wear, whereas everybody else look like they dressed up for the photoshoot. great job.

KARASU (or ALEX?)
the purpose of the shoot was to be cool. now, i told all of the judges that there's nothing cooler than being aloof. you look aloof here and it's awesome. you look snooty and like you're not even trying to be cool which makes it that much cooler. awesome!

SARA
your pose makes you look uncomfortable. i like the picture, but i'd like it more if it were two different pictures. your legs are doing something and then your upper body's doing something else. separately, they'd work, but as a whole it just looks a little stiff. it would have been better if maybe you did something different with your legs.

CHLOE
it's a nice picture. a really nice picture, but it just doesn't fit the brief. you're supposed to be cool and whatever, and here you look relaxed and ethereal. if tyra had asked for something else, this would have been better. plus, we can't see the car. i think the car is a very important part of this photoshoot.

SHAQ
umm where are you? the only thing i can see it's the car in the background. at first i thought that if i put on my glasses i would see better but the picture is just too damn dark. :/

FRAMED CALL OUT ORDER
JONNY
CHLOE
MIKIEL
ROBBIE
AMARANTH
LAUREN
SARA
KARASU
CHANTAL
KILLIAN
SHAQ
KENDRA

FIESTAAAA
MIKIEL
KARASU
LAUREN
JONNY
ROBBIE
SARA
CHANTAL
AMARANTH
CHLOE
KILLIAN
SHAQ


i'm not forgetting anyone, am i?

Fiiiiierce bitches!!

FRAMED
Kendra,
I'm not sure if this is supposed to be comedic, or an attempt at fierce. I like how brave you are looking into the camera like that, unfortunately this is not nearly as couture as any of the others. Also, you and Shaq need to make your pictures bigger! Something tells me they were taken with a webcam.

Okay, Robbie

You surprised me because I didn't think you would do something this creative. You have a face made for modeling. There is a sensitivity here that is very unique and special. However, next week I would like to see you not do such an extreme profile so we can see a more intense face.

Jonny:

Johnny Depp is more like it! You really look like him here! I'm absolutely in love with this picture. The expression on your face is very modelesque and I commend you on the choice of what you did with your arms. It makes your body look long but not contorted. Brilliant neck extension. You've definitely surpassed my expectations.

Karasu:
You are seriously getting creative in this picture. I kind of see what you're going for, but it's come of as a little amateurish. You could have looked like, "GRR! AHH!" but you look a bit like you're whimpering. That being said, you have all it takes aesthetically to model, and it shows here. Just work on your expression.

Sara
It's funny, I find you actually look a lot YOUNGER than Mel. What you DO have is the ability to keep your mouth closed. This is not a horrible picture, but it's not an amazing picture. What it does show is amazing bone structure and absolutely beautiful features. I think you'll go far.

Amaranth
It's pretty and sex-kitten, but compared to some of them we've seen it's just not very interesting. I think your personal style definitely makes YOU unique, but you can't rely on being the only goth girl in the bunch to set you apart. You need to realize what you have to work with here - an absolutely gorgeous face, a good sense of angles, and the help of the creativity-queen Lucy! You have more potential than this.

Mikiel
Child!! When I saw your pre-show pics I didn't think you would be so incredible. This shot is an art shot. It is really a cool graphic and I can see it in magazines. The expression is perfect - neutral but not bored with just enough intensity. You have pretty exagerated features but you've figured out an angle to downplay them.

Killian
Sigh... I really want you to do well. We've said over and over that we think you'll do well because you know what the judges want. But I think that's your downfall. I think you're thinking too much about it. Where the others showed a modelesque creativity, you showed a sloppy creativity. I don't think you need to try so hard.

Chloe
You have a very old-Hollywood face but there's something unique about you I cannot quite put my finger on. This picture is absolutely beautiful in your own way. I love the use of the mirror. It is simple without looking amateurish. I have no negatives!!

Chantal
You have a lot of potential there, missy. The eyes are getting there and are quite good for your first shot, but in the future I'd suggest studying magazines or the others' pictures a bit more. Also, some neck extension would have made it more magical. However, you're undeniably beautiful.

Lauren
I have to say I don't entirely "get" this photo either. You seem very creative, like you could have just done something INSANE, but it's just kind of a kid with a camera. However I do commend the allure in your expression and your big bouncy hair.

Shaq
Where are you? This is such a tiny picture, and there's a lot going on to take away from you - the extra hand, your somewhat distorted body, and the way your hands are placed on the frame don't look graceful. You're a good-looking guy and you seem to want this really bad. I just think you may try a bit too hard.

FORD FIESTA

Killian
Are you waiting to go out? The reverse lights are on! I get what you were trying to go for here - mytserious and dark, am I right? What it kind of looks like to me is just bored. Too extreme-profile. There's not enough movement. I can see how you might have apprehension to damaging your family's car or something, but there is more you could have done without hopping on the car.

Lauren
Good choice of clothing, it's fashionable but expresses your personality. Your pose is neat, like, "I'm the bomb!" but I think you could have done a bit more. I notice you have kind of an ironic smirk in all of your pictures, which is cute, but know when to use it and when not to use it.

Robbie
First off, tell your photographer GREAT job because the car looks amazing. You also look amazing, but without looking like you tried too hard. I still see a slight worry in your eyes though.

Karasu
YES! THIS is the perfection I knew you could give. Your outfit is the best yet of anyone's - simple but unique. Your expression is sexy and a bit snooty, like "Yeah, I bet you wanna get with me, 'cause this car is so damn fly." GREAT job.

Mikiel
You really like that looking-skyward angle, don't you? Well, as long as we don't see it EVERY time I'm cool with it. Your body pose is great because you look too-cool-for-school and your fashion choice is superb. My only wish is that you had placed your arm on top of the side-view mirror so that it didn't cut the elbow off. Also, the light is really focused on the handicapped parking sign.

Johnny
Great fashion choice once again. This probably looks the most like the AusNTM pictures. The body language is great but the face is lacking for me. I think you were going for aloof and got just-out-of-bed. But all-in-all because you have such a strong face it still works okay.

Chantal
On the bright side, you've got a sick little body, and you also possess a good ability to transform. What you are right now is confused. The pose all around just doesn't work... I'm looking at your hands, the way they're stretched out. It doesn't read graceful. You were my pre-show favourite but your pictures disappoint me because you seem to try so hard and get lost along the way.

Chloe
So, uh... you got hit by the car? Where is it? I don't get it. Did you read the brief and think 'siesta?' You were one of my favourites for the frame shot, but this doesn't fit the brief from what I see. I love this picture because I love you in it but you sould definitely be reprimanded for not following the brief.

Sara
The angle at which you took this doesn't work because we can't tell what position your body is in. It makes you look very disproportionate. The face is cool though, trying to be unaware of the camera. Overall, it's the slumpy pose that kinda ruins it. You're a girl who needs to study.

Amaranth
Scary eyes, Amaranth. Scary in a bad way. Think Sheena's Fiercee shot. However, it is a modelesque body pose and I like that you went for something warm and inviting - I kind of had you pegged for only doing dark and indie-ish shots. My biggest critique is that you can SO tell it was rushed. I know you were on a time delay, but unfortunately "I thought it was due another day" is a bad excuse. You're lucky you're gorgeous or it wouldn't have looked so nice.

Shaq
Uh... is this security footage?
I'm sorry dude, you're not taking this seriously and it's not worth a comment.

This is my order so far FOR THE FRAMED SHOTS ONLY:
Mikiel
Jonny
Chloe
Robbie
Chantal
Amaranth
Karasu
Sara
Lauren
Killian
Shaq
Kendra (based on either shot, really... whichever you choose, hers are easily my least favourite).

This is my order so far for the Feista shots:
Mikiel
Karasu
Jonny
Robbie
Lauren
Chantal
Sara
Amaranth
Chloe
Killian
Shaq

Anyone else notice in the BG of Robbie's picture there is a stuffed animal violating another stuffie??

haha if you hadn't said anything i wouldn't have noticed.

I love how Nigel and I have almost the exact same comments. GO US!!

great minds think alike
except for the choice of pictures.

like i told leigh, there's nothing cooler than being aloof. karasu's aloof in the last one.

Yeah, I like his expression in the third, but I love his spidery legs in the second.
As for Killian's, I'm not a fan of either but I picked the second because you can at least see his face.

i liked killian's first because he looks bored and pensive.
idk , but that expression's in right now. haha


i think the legs make him look posey, and i'm not a fan of poseyness. ahem.

the face is great in the second one though.

His second photo reminds me of my first photo last cycle.

Which I believe got called out for being too posey.

karasu's?
i didn't say it was posey.

my comments never made it to the first panel cause i was late
i did send them though.

Well, I mean, you said the legs looked a tad posey. Which I kind of agree, but I tend to gravitate towards that kind of bend-inward look.

haha i meant your pic wasn't posey.

you mean kinda like brooke's career shot?

if it was a subtle bent it would have been better,imo.

Oh. Well others thought it was too posey. I agree with them to an extent but I still like the shot of me. It just wasn't as "classic" as it should have been. I didn't realize we could have done just head shots. I woulda done something soooo different looking back. Still, it's a nice pic to have of myself!

I hope I wasn't too wordy.

I like Karasu's first Fiesta shot because his expression is more "real"

FRAME SHOTS:

KENDRA: I hate to say in an online competition that your camera is bad, but that really hurts this photo. The expression itself, while i'm glad that you took a risk, is not modelesque at all and the whole picture lacks creativity. You just need to become more inspired!

CHANTAL-JADE: Ooh, you're a little reminiscent of Audrey with the eye makeup. I agree with Tyra though, this angle is not model-y at all. I have to turn my head to look at it, and then discover it would look much better more upright. I think you have a ton of potential to work with though.

LAUREN: Oh I just love the movement here. You shine through your gorgeous hair. You've made this shot glamorous with your expression, but the teeshirt and the background, not so glam. Love the coy smile!

SHAQ: Well, it's not a very good start, but it gives room for improvement! The angle is too high, you aren't doing anything special with the frame, and the look on your face says "profile pic," not "fierce model workin' it."

CHLOE: This is beautiful! I love your brave stare into the lens. Your style is unique and it works in this photo. I can see this working with so many different ad campaigns as a concept as well. Bravo!

SARA: Good, not great. I like your background, but the outside light is causing you to squint. We don't want to hide those pretty eyes, especially when it makes you frown. You have a strong foundation on light and angles, now you just need to get creative with it. Putting your hands on the bottom of the frame limits you.

AMARANTH: Ha-cha-cha! If looks could scorch. This is seductive and powerful, and i love your choice of warm lighting, it just ignites your hair and eyes! Very artistic. Your pose is slightly rigid as opposed to original, but I believe that lends more to your expression.

MIKIEL: Wow! This is very professional looking, a clean background and very dramatic lighting. I love love love your choice to pull yourself through the frame. My only criticism is that your eyes are looking away from the light and the camera, but don't really focus on anything else. Make sure they have a purpose.

ROBBIE: This is certainly different. As an artistic shot, i absolutely adore it. The setting, composition, camera effects, are all very unique. Your expression is believable and I disagree about the profile, I think it highlights a good angle for you. Does it fulfill the brief though? We can see your whole body, and the head shot is cut-and-pasted. Whatever liberties you took were successful, but be careful about the Photoshop rules.

JONNY: You little sexpot! I'm so glad the boys in this competition aren't afraid of showing a little skin. This shot is deliberate, confrontational, and raw. I love it. The prospective and angles you used with your arms and hands make this POP. Well done.

KARASU: I have to say, I don't get it. This shot reminds me of Jono's melon pic. The mess in the background is distracting, and your ?costume? is more nonsensical than artistic. HOWEVER, i love your eyes. Use those eyes.

KILLIAN: Ahem. *whispers* myspace angle...ok done bitching about that. Rarely should you shoot from extremely above. And rarely should you shoot in the bathroom. But I like your honesty with the camera. I don't think empty eyes will be a problem for you.

(FIESTA)

AMARANTH: This is so eery! I love the simplicity of your pose, and your hands on the jacket. You don't look cold at all. My one complaint is that your eyeballs are gone. If I could see your eyes this would be a wonderful photo, but it shows potential.

SARA: This is much better than your frame shot. I am a little confused about the pose, it leans too much, and I can see that your arms and legs are bent but you are facing directly at the camera so it makes you look short. The face is a little lost in the eyes, like you are daydreaming. Love the outfit and the background though!

SHAQ: Umm...I don't want to be mean, but this does not work at all. We need to be able to see you in the shot. I'm sorry if you couldn't get a good shot with the camera you have, but this is a competition.

CHLOE: This is an...interesting...interpretation of the brief. It looks like you got hit by the car. Not a bad shot by itself, your expression and pose are quiet beautiful, but it isn't what the client asked for.

CHANTAL-JADE: Oh my. Well, this is a very professional, clean looking shot and i LOVE your hair, outfit, glasses, background. The problem is your pose. You look like a rather fashionable hooker. If you had bent one leg, or lifted one arm it would be different. Loads of potential though.

MIKIEL: I gotta say, I like your frame shot better. This is very good, but I think for you it's amateur. The face looks like you're mocking male models, and your elbows have completely vanished. Not a bad shot though.

JONNY: Love the badboy thing you're going for. The pose is relaxed, your face has a purpose, and the composition is simple. Would definitely see this in a magazine. Try not to get too cocky, though.

LAUREN : Someone's been looking at magazines! You are sellin' that coat, girl. Very professional pose. The expression is very similar to your frame shot, though. Be careful you don't become a one-trick pony! (that is totally not the saying)

ROBBIE: This is a very dynamic shot because it has such a huge environment. But besides standing there, you really aren't doing much. Your expression registers more fear than "cool," but I like your clean editing. For the future, try to create a great photo with your own body and rely less on great camera work to sell it for you.

KARASU: This is MUCH better than your frame shot. The pose is simple, yet creative and displays the clothing well. The background is beautiful and your expression is very emotive.

KILLIAN: This is a well-composed shot, your pose and the lines in the background are fierce. However, you are not present. Your profile is barely visible, and you seem rigid and as if you are trying to be unaware of the camera. I would like to see some of your other shots for this.

CALLOUT ORDERS: FRAMED

Mikiel
Jonny
Chloe
Amaranth
Robbie
Lauren
Chantal
Sara
Karasu
Killian
Kendra
Shaq

FIESTA:

Jonny
Karasu
Mikiel
Amaranth
Chantal
Lauren
Robbie
Chloe
Sara
Killian
Shaq
KENDRA

trust me cozy, you dont wanna sekillians other fiesta shots lol

he was wearing that big black jacket and baggy jeans and he looked really disproportioned in his body and it all looked real strange

hmmm...that's disappointing.

Poor Killian. I have a feeling he might be gone-gone this shoot.
I still looooove Mikiel. I'm glad he pulled through. It seriously looks like SUCH an amazing graphic shot. MY fave so far, but Jonny and Amaranth are close in second and third respectively. I bet they'll be our top three, guys!! I'm soooo excited!!

And I've definitely found a dopelganger for Sara. In that picture at least, she looks EXACTLY like my little dance friend Lianne.

Which is good because I miss Lianne.

my three favorite pictures so far are mikiel's, chloe's and jonny's.

I agree.
Johnny = total sexpot.
Chloe = a beauty that is classic and unique at the same time.
Mikiel = both an art shot, and a lotion ad.

I have a feeling we may kiss Killian bye-bye based on his two shots... they're not good. In a way I kinda hope someone does worse than him so that he can stay and improve.

i thought we're not eliminating anyone yet?

and yeah those are the reasons why they rule haha.

I don't know what Lesus is gonna decide... Maybe it'll follow the same formula as last year?

well no one's been eliminated because of the first photoshoot.

Thats why I assigned two photoshoots for the first week, there WILL be an elimination, so everyone gets at least 2 shots in their portfolio for the comp

A few people havnt sudmitted anything, so they will be "eliminated" if nothings submitted

IVE FINALLY CHOSEN ONE FOR KARASU!
You guys each chose one diff one LOL which didnt help me at all! I wish we could have all three coz i really do love each one, but oh well, Mr Janice, you win this time :p

COMMENTS:
FRAME:

Chantal: Love the expression and the theme and what you did with the pearls, hate the angle, it is a bit Myspace.

Lauren: I love the cheeky expression, the eyes and the little smirk are great. I also like how creative you got with the head movement and the hair, I think that was really interesting, reminds me of Jenah's covergirl shot, just...better haha. The only thing I will suggest is to maybe think about your background a bit more. If you look at Jonny and Mikiel's their pictures are more dynamic because they dont have clutter or unneccesary objects in their backgrounds.

Shaq: Dude, you need to make your pictures bigger when you upload them, this was way too small to judge properly becvause I have to squint to see it. From what i can see, it is the same location as your pre show pic and it pretty much looks the same, just with a real frame. Get more creative and inventive and try out different locations.

Chloe: This is stunning. The way youve used the mirror, you look very reflective and vulnerable, yet also quite proud. Like youve been looking in the mirror all day long trying to determine who you are and you have finally just discovered it and captured the moment.

Sara: I think you have the same problem your sister did, where you are trying TOO hard to push an emotion through and it looks a bit forced, so next time you are doing a shoot, just pull back a little. Less is usually more. What really captures me in this photo is the contrast between your colourful shirt and the swampy marsh in the background, it was a really clever choice of location and wardrobe.

Amaranth: I do like the way the lighting hits your face, but I find this shot a bit bland. It reminds me of a dodgy high school drama production where everyone wears black, runs around the stage with picture frames, making funny faces and its somehow supposed represent a mother losing her child to cancer or some obscure crap like that. To me, theres really no emotion or purpose there. I think your preshow pic was way better.

Mikiel: Its great to see a really artistic shot, and someone using a plain background, it makes it look very professional. Nothing bad to really say about the shot, I really like it.

Robbie: I absolutely LOVE what you did with your shoot, having a different pic inside the frame, I thought that was really creative, so massive props for that. And I dont care that its profile at all, not every shot has to be face on, I dunno what drugs these other judges are on, the emotion is still quite clear.

Jonny: My only criticism is that you have dirty nails. Models have to be clean, but thats just me being pedantic about a shot I love.

Karasu: I think this is a classic case of someone trying too hard to do too many different things with makeup and props. I would love this shot so much more if there was no makup, it would make the flower stand out so much more, which wouldve been good coz it is such a great colour and shape. I feel what you were going for, but it was a bit overkill.

Killian: Location, location LOCATION! It doesnt look like a fashion sot, it just looks like soem guy taking a picture of himself in his bathroom. I like your features, but I dont think you pushed it hard enough, its just a bit flat and uninspiring.

CALLOUT ORDER SO FAR:

FRAME:
Mikiel
Robbie
Chloe
Jonny
Lauren
Karasu
Sara
Chantal
Amaranth
Killian
Shaq
Kendra


COMMENTS FOR FIESTA:

SHAQ: Dude, how do even expect us to judge this, seriously? We cant see a damn thing. You only sent in this one shot, its dark, its sent in on the last day- that just shows complete laziness and disorganisation to me.

SARA: This would be an amazing shot if you were looking at the camera, or even upwards and sideways a bit more, just not down. You kind of dont look present in the eyes.But from your shoot, I can tell you have good instincts with what you are doing and I love everything else about this picture except for the eyes.

CHLOE: This does kind of stray away from the brief, but I cant help but like it anyway. This kind of image would probably fit more with a summer catalogue rather than an editorial spread. Great shot again, but not really what we were looking for.

CHANTAL-JADE: This is very London haha. I love the strength you have in your eyes. I think the pose MIGHT be a little too sex kitten for what we were looking for, but I kind of like it anyway. Actually, looking at it more, it almost looks like you are taking the piss out of the 50s pin up models, and thinking of it that way makes it look cooler, kind of a satirical humour to the shot and its quite quirky, which I always like. Its a shame your other shots were blurry, coz you had some good shots. Your main strength is definately your eyes, they were strong in every shot. Just dont get blurred shots next time haha!

JONNY: I really like this shot, the whole mood is exactly what I was looking for. Looking through your film, though, I did find that you seem to be really unsure of what to do with your arms, they were up everywhere and thats ok to do, as long as theres a purpose to accompany that, and I didnt feel the purpose. It worked with this shot in particular, but I dont think I could have used any of the other shots coz they looked very awkward. Sometimes just letting your arms hang limp beside your body works a lot better, especially for editorial stuff like this.

MIKIEL: You are the coolest frickin kid on the block! This is a great shot. I can see your signature seems to be the whole "stare into the light" thing. I want you to drop that right now.

LAUREN: You are a short girl, but you have made your legs and your body look really long Your face is strong and your body is strong, good choice of wardrobe. The thing that bugs me about this pic is the composition. Theres too much whitespace up the top and youve cut off your legs and the car. If the camera had been positioned a few cms (or inches ) to the left and a few down, it wouldve been a lot better.

ROBBIE: The face is good. Im not sure bout the hands on the pocket though. It woulda looked better if you had your thumbs sticking out, or just your hands by your side. What I like about this though is that you arent trying too hard haha. The brief was to just stand there and be cool, and youre doing just that.

KARASU: This cycle, if I cant decide what pic to use i post the frames I like and the judges then tell me which ones to use and not use. Sometimes this is bad coz there are lots of crap ones or good coz there are lots of great ones. I posted THREE of your shots. And this is good news for you coz there were THREE that I thought were amazing, and I dont come across that too often in this comp. It was so difficult choosing just one for you, coz I liked quite a few so much. You picked a great wardrobe, great location and really did so many different things with the car, not just choose one position and take 5 pictures in the same position. So I congratulate you for impressing me so

KILLIAN: I can tell how hard you are trying, and I want you to take everything we say and really work on your shots. Unlike a lot of the judges, I actually dont mind that you arent looking at the camera, it was an interesting choice. The choice of outfit was really poor. The jacket was too big and your jeans were too baggy, it made you look larger than I think you are. In pretty much all of your shots, your body looked really disproportioned and strange. I think you have potential to do well though, so keep trying.


CALLOUT FOR FIESTA:
Karasu
Mikiel
Jonny
Robbie
Sara
Lauren
Chantal
Chloe
Killian
Shaq