One of my fave poems - and relevant to your next shoot!
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One of my fave poems - and relevant to your next shoot!
A Display of Mackerel - by Mark Doty
They lie in parallel rows,
on ice, head to tail,
each a foot of luminosity
barred with black bands,
which divide the scales'
radiant sections
like seams of lead
in a Tiffany window.
Iridescent, watery
prismatics: think abalone,
the wildly rainbowed
mirror of a soapbubble sphere,
think sun on gasoline.
Splendor, and splendor,
and not a one in any way
distinguished from the other
-- nothing about them
of individuality. Instead
they're all exact expressions
of the one soul,
each a perfect fulfilment
of heaven's template,
mackerel essence. As if,
after a lifetime arriving
at this enameling, the jeweler's
made uncountable examples,
each as intricate
in its oily fabulation
as the one before
Suppose we could iridesce,
like these, and lose ourselves
entirely in the universe
of shimmer -- would you want
to be yourself only,
unduplicatable, doomed
to be lost? They'd prefer,
plainly, to be flashing participants,
multitudinous. Even now
they seem to be bolting
forward, heedless of stasis.
They don't care they're dead
and nearly frozen,
just as, presumably,
they didn't care that they were living:
all, all for all,
the rainbowed school
and its acres of brilliant classrooms,
in which no verb is singular,
or every one is. How happy they seem,
even on ice, to be together, selfless,
which is the price of gleaming.
They lie in parallel rows,
on ice, head to tail,
each a foot of luminosity
barred with black bands,
which divide the scales'
radiant sections
like seams of lead
in a Tiffany window.
Iridescent, watery
prismatics: think abalone,
the wildly rainbowed
mirror of a soapbubble sphere,
think sun on gasoline.
Splendor, and splendor,
and not a one in any way
distinguished from the other
-- nothing about them
of individuality. Instead
they're all exact expressions
of the one soul,
each a perfect fulfilment
of heaven's template,
mackerel essence. As if,
after a lifetime arriving
at this enameling, the jeweler's
made uncountable examples,
each as intricate
in its oily fabulation
as the one before
Suppose we could iridesce,
like these, and lose ourselves
entirely in the universe
of shimmer -- would you want
to be yourself only,
unduplicatable, doomed
to be lost? They'd prefer,
plainly, to be flashing participants,
multitudinous. Even now
they seem to be bolting
forward, heedless of stasis.
They don't care they're dead
and nearly frozen,
just as, presumably,
they didn't care that they were living:
all, all for all,
the rainbowed school
and its acres of brilliant classrooms,
in which no verb is singular,
or every one is. How happy they seem,
even on ice, to be together, selfless,
which is the price of gleaming.
CozyTombRez- Number of posts : 243
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Re: One of my fave poems - and relevant to your next shoot!
oooh dude!
i love how the fish are being compared to jewels and jewelry, but gasoline (when it's all raindowy) at the same time
and how they're beautiful, but at the same time just plain and one of many
good poemyness, you have good taste
i love how the fish are being compared to jewels and jewelry, but gasoline (when it's all raindowy) at the same time
and how they're beautiful, but at the same time just plain and one of many
good poemyness, you have good taste
LucyInTheSky_08- Number of posts : 119
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Re: One of my fave poems - and relevant to your next shoot!
thanks! he was part of my 8-poet contemporary class, and i have one of his books. it's pretty good
he's the master of imagery and color. And little triplets jam-packed.
he's the master of imagery and color. And little triplets jam-packed.
CozyTombRez- Number of posts : 243
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Re: One of my fave poems - and relevant to your next shoot!
lol
(you're still better at writing)
what?
who said that
(you're still better at writing)
what?
who said that
LucyInTheSky_08- Number of posts : 119
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Re: One of my fave poems - and relevant to your next shoot!
bitch u don't know me!
lol
nah i haven't written anything in forever...it's annoying.
i was gonna write something for my school's short story/poem compilation book thingie, but i really wasn't inspired and i didn't want to just write anything.
guess all these papers are taking it out of me.
lol
nah i haven't written anything in forever...it's annoying.
i was gonna write something for my school's short story/poem compilation book thingie, but i really wasn't inspired and i didn't want to just write anything.
guess all these papers are taking it out of me.
CozyTombRez- Number of posts : 243
Age : 35
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Re: One of my fave poems - and relevant to your next shoot!
see?
that's why people shouldn't go to college....
KIDDING!
that's why people shouldn't go to college....
KIDDING!
LucyInTheSky_08- Number of posts : 119
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Re: One of my fave poems - and relevant to your next shoot!
MOOooooo!
.....sorry, I just wanted to get involved in the discussion
.....sorry, I just wanted to get involved in the discussion
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LucyInTheSky_08- Number of posts : 119
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Re: One of my fave poems - and relevant to your next shoot!
THAT IS SOOOO INAPPROPRIATE
CozyTombRez- Number of posts : 243
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